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Re: The Home We Were Promised
I love your poem! To me, it gives the feeling of longing for a place to be comfortable. I do think that you should add some stanza breaks to give ...
Sep 7 -
Re: “ 再见, Sweet Asian Sister “
I just really love how this poem. It kind of gives me a sense of plain sadness rather than envy, like you know that's just how it is. I also ...
Sep 6 -
Re: Luther Vandross - Never Too Much
I really like how this homey nostalgic feeling is used to describe a person (I hope I explained that right) it makes me feel like the narrator has a very ...
Sep 6
