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Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 2
Well done KJ! I really enjoy your style. One small tip, though, check your descriptions, because some of them tend to get a little overlong. Also, there are some grammatical ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 1 (Edited)
Can I have more? That was really good. It's very hard to find a good story in present tense, but you handle it very nicely. It's a very interesting story. ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Rainbow underground: the stone city
I don't want to insult you, but this really isn't that great. The ideas are very good, and I like them, but your writing is poor. You have minimal grammar. ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Veiled Soul
you have a very interesting style. i like it. sort of like charles dickens writes science fiction. :D this is a very good beginning. i enjoyed your descriptions and the ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Alone - The Beginning
I was at half a mind to whistle at it... this should be I had half a mind to whistle at it... it think this is a very good story. ...
Dec 31, 2007