mikepyro

Bob is not fully insane. In fact, the first part states he checks into the institution on his own accord. He suffers from a variation of schizophrenia, and many people ...

I've heard of the book. Know what its about. Aside that there's no intentional similarities. Just about every story has been done before though, especially when it involves the holocaust ...

many thanks for the reviews everyone. I wrote Bob about two years ago and he's still one of my favorite characters. Actually, I'd planned to have Bob hang himself but ...

I understand jiggity. I'll see what works, straighten up the structure and maybe repost after a while. And yes, it actually was historically acurate, both in concentration camps and war ...

thanks for the shone comment. I didn't catch that. Well, most of the people up to 17 don't have school that really constricts them, but I understand. I will be ...

This isn't my first time writing on a site. I'm a member of ABCtales and Writerscafe. I understand how it works. Last time I checked, perfect grammar isn't necessary for ...

I apreciate ur thoughts, I'v ereviewed three works so far, not sure why they didn't show up. also, a clause does not need to stand on its own if its ...

I'm gonna leave it the way it is. I don't think a person should be so lazy they can't read a 15 page story. I might break it up, I'll ...