mikepyro

And some people complained about awesome story getting featured...lol Kidding. It's simple and worth a smile. Not really worth a review, honestly can't say anything else. So...yeah, sorry about you ...

were now stiff -- should be ARE now stiff, as this is a present tense point. just happened to note, because of this entry in fact that another month has ...

3rd pic is just fabulous. Love the brilliant shades of color, perfect hair and figure formation. I do agree the eyes are a teency bit lopsided, the hands are a ...

you def have a solid, original, but not overly flowery approach to your imagery that works quite well. I felt the use of the old time language to feel stiff ...

A solid, unqiue and rather emotional piece. There is some stilted moments to the voice though. The "I am sorry for that" for instance reads rather awkwardly. For such an ...

i'm biased as Zelda is the greatest thing ever to me. I do admit the rays look a bit odd, perhaps if they rose fro the top and bottom they ...

that's great, so what did you think of the rest of the story? You know, beyond the first paragraph...

I agree several lines do feel forced, especially the frown line. To me I feel you'd do better in prose. You won't limit yourself by trying to find a ccertain ...

I'd cut the 'forever and ever" and just leave in my heart true. Sounds so much better. Gotta agree the dove line just feels completely out of place, and so ...

I didn't reall find much problem with the chorus, aside the out of place use of whence. honestly this reads more like a poem than lyrics, as a lyric there's ...

Warning: Contains explicit use of the word ‘awesome’. There once was a man who was awesome. Everywhere he went people would bow down before his awesomeness. "He's so awesome!" they'd ...

have 6000 more points than I need. guess i better start givin :)

I awoke to a blaze of white light. I'd been dreaming; I thought I still was. The clock beside me sat stuck at 11:11 am. The room was quaint, simple. ...

yes while the piece is very well written and described I rolled my eyes big time at the crippling mind line. Even if it does feel like this for you ...

Another angry song? Well this was still decent. The chorus I admit is the best part of it, and you manage to mix some dark and violent images very well, ...