mikepyro

A wonderful all dialogue story. I know it looks long but that's only cause the format adds a break between each speaker. Enjoy! Wake up. “Hello?” Hello, Michael. “Who is ...

Honestly I felt the piece was overstuffed. You take an idea as cliched as seeing someone the night they died in dream and fill it with fluffly, lengthened imagery. Don't ...

Hate to sound mean but your example of depth has been done 1000 times before in every emo poem ever written. Please don't confuse subtlety and sparse description with a ...

Hate to sound mean but your example of depth has been done 1000 times before in every loss poem ever written. Please don't confuse subtlety and sparse description with a ...

This is what happens when you skip four chapters each review. Don't act confused when you put no effort into processing the story.

I'd very much appreciate, and would return, a review to my story Charlie. Im sorry there's no link, for some reason my comp isn't letting me copy the links.

I would very much enjoy a review over my animal novel. The work is complete so whatever ch is fine, even just the first. If you'd prefer reviewing a short ...

Four stories about the attack. All but the first fictional. Separate pieces, seoerate tales. I've tried to avoid the overly sappy style so many of these pieces seem to have ...

It's a decent piece, not a great one, and its subject helped the feature. You get many facts wring about the towers, the attack, you give us no real description ...

I really liked the faded background of the piece, very unique and original, unlike your usual style. Works really well. It's not as detailed as your other works but it ...

Really cool. The wings are a bit low, I've always seen wings right around the shoulder blades. This looks like the lower back. Minor thing. They looks good, nice touch ...

Overall this is a very solid work, so much more professional and well written then most of what I find on yws. There's a lyrical style you present with your ...

Thanks guys. Had as much fun writing this thing as y'all did reading it hopefully. Was so much fun and oddly it was pretty easy once I got into the ...

Thanks you two, glad you enjoyed it

Thanks confetti, appreciate the small tips. And glad you enjoyed it.