mikepyro

Hey everyone, nice to be here. glad to meet everyone. I'm michael, 18 year old writer. been published a few times, also a member of abctales and writerscafe. this is ...

(originally a three part piece. I've decided to put together into one) I am Bob (part 1) I am Bob. I am Bob. My name is Bob. Although yesterday it ...

It's a nice start. I will admit it is a bit short, even for a prologue. though you do have a lot of imagery going on, sometimes you get repetition ...

I apreciate ur thoughts, I'v ereviewed three works so far, not sure why they didn't show up. also, a clause does not need to stand on its own if its ...

I'm gonna leave it the way it is. I don't think a person should be so lazy they can't read a 15 page story. I might break it up, I'll ...

it was pretty good. not sure the BAM BAM BAM was needed in the descriptions, kinda ruined the subtly of the moment. I didn't mind the snowdalls so much as ...

It was a formal looking sign. Neat. Tasteful. Elegant. The kind of sign that says "Hey, look at me. I'm better than you" to all the lesser signs of the ...

(this piece was recently plagerized by CastlesInTheSky, a writer removed for several counts of plagerism filed against her. I have won story of the week on ABCtales well before she ...