mikepyro

*knock on door* *Tom stands from table, crosses room and opens door* *a man stands in doorway, cloaked in all black, his black hair slicked back and shining, his eyes ...

I must say I had an absolute blast reading this piece, one of the funniest I'd read in a while. The humor never seems forced or set up, though I ...

Warning: Contains explicit use of the word Awesome There once was a man who was awesome. Everywhere he went people would bow down before his awesomeness. "He's so awesome!" They'd ...

This wasn't bad. I really didn't connect with it as much as I'd hoped I would. There's so many restrictions on these posts, you should instead just take the time ...

I enjoyed this. I can't believe people consider this a long story. My god, its like two pages. I really connected with the character you created, he has a real ...

Bob is not fully insane. In fact, the first part states he checks into the institution on his own accord. He suffers from a variation of schizophrenia, and many people ...

I've heard of the book. Know what its about. Aside that there's no intentional similarities. Just about every story has been done before though, especially when it involves the holocaust ...

many thanks for the reviews everyone. I wrote Bob about two years ago and he's still one of my favorite characters. Actually, I'd planned to have Bob hang himself but ...

I must agree with the others. I've flipped through some of your stuff and I know you're rather talented, however this is a bit underwhelming. It's far too short, a ...

1. Taylor “Have you ever tasted dirt? Have you ever felt your heart stop, if only for a minute? Have you ever smelled the sweet odor of wet earth, and ...

I thought the sudden change to the boy's diary wa s abit rough and it really didn't build much. I enjoyed the idea of the boy as a more mysterious ...

I understand jiggity. I'll see what works, straighten up the structure and maybe repost after a while. And yes, it actually was historically acurate, both in concentration camps and war ...

I enjoyed this piece, sure it may have been a bit hard to follow in times, but it's point is clear and a general message of war is relayed. I ...

thanks for the shone comment. I didn't catch that. Well, most of the people up to 17 don't have school that really constricts them, but I understand. I will be ...

This isn't my first time writing on a site. I'm a member of ABCtales and Writerscafe. I understand how it works. Last time I checked, perfect grammar isn't necessary for ...