mikepyro

try stephen kings early work. Cujo, The Shining, The Mist The Shining will scare the crap out of you. if you want a good vampire book read Let The Right ...

the story isn't meant to be continued. it's a tragic tale. the story of a martyr. martyrs kill themselves. it was just meant to show the actions leading to his ...

I dreamt the other night I met Death. The room where I sat was cold and dark. I felt if I spoke my voice would echo. The desolate blackness, like ...

Yes paolini is terrible. and icaruss, it's called an opinion. I don't agree with dick and huck fin but I thought the lord of the rings books were terrible. like ...

I was having this conversation with my friend who is a huge twilight fan (like even writes fan fic) *shudder* I told her I thought meyer was just a mediocre ...

yes Steinbeck and McCarthy are prob the most american you can get in terms of great writing make sure if you read McCarthy get The Road or No Country for ...

My greatest artwork was an epic stick figure battle composed of 1000s of stickfigures locked in mortal combat. so I'm not exactly an expert on these sort of things. I've ...

Where does paradise lie? In the shadow of the swords. The remote is light, cheap plastic and wires, but it feels heavy in my hands. All around the shouts and ...

This is a nice enough work, but I must agree with all that has been written beforehand, it can certainly use some improvement. It's a slick piece, the character is ...

This was a pretty nice effort. You get some great insite into your life and you establish an easy style that a reader can follow. The piece has some genuinly ...

it's a good work. yes though I really don't care too much for rhyme poetry I never found the style too forced or too distracting that it would take the ...

Yes, I must say this is a good enough work. it has some rough patches but your style is well laid out and you give some beautiful touches that help ...

Yeah, the character lacked a bit of emotion, and there are a few grammar mistakes. also, whil it is a prologue, even as a prologue it's a bit short. doesn't ...

It was pretty entertaining. A bit all over the place, but that's the intent. As much as I enjoyed all the witty dialogue, alot of it just wasn't that funny. ...

so glad you enjoyed the piece kickstart. adequate man is my most recent story, bit of a break from my normal style. actually started off as a horror story but ...