mikepyro

Its much better than most poetry I read here, I must admit, so congrats! :D Its a lovely little piece, despite some shaky rhyming schemes, that managed a few chuckles ...

I really enjoed the theme and the actual emotion as well, but god the rhyming truly is terrible here. Please don't do rhyming poetry if you can't pull it off, ...

Its a decent piece. You manage a lyrical and heavy style quite well and your words rhyme without stumbling over each other. I must say it is a rather cliche ...

Deleted version. Please check the updates version on my profile. You'll love it! More a short story than script, I know. Appreciate all comments and advice received! :)

What am I doing? I'm in the middle of a room. My House. Ok. That's the where. Now the why. I'm naked. Bottom half. Totally buffing it. Why am I ...

(borderline R rating) John pushed the end button on his white home phone and placed it in its cradle. It lay there, the soft buzz of static fading as it ...

I'm a ways away? -means he's not right next to the gates. so he has to walk. and as for the extra words, it's just how he talks. people don't ...

Much of the piece is dialogue focused. And much is based on fact, including the three o'clock phone call play out. I chose to focus instead on the here and ...

This piece wasn't that bad. I must say I didn't really find it very tense or creepy though, just sort of entertaining. It's a good story and well developed idea, ...

Dedicated to my Uncle and Aunt. --- The phone's ringing. What time is it? 3:00 AM. Who the hell's calling at 3:00 AM? "Hello?" "Mr. Krpec?" "Yes." "Mr. Krpec my ...

He told me he was going to kill me. And he seemed very serious. At least I think he was, I really wasn't paying attention. I figured he was joking. ...

I recently had the chance to see this 43 minute musical and I must say it is one of the most hilarious, witty, touching, emotional, and thoroughly entertaining musicals I've ...

1. Literature and Bullshit: The Dynamic Duo Today I bullshat my way through AP English 4. I'm very good at it, bullshitting. In fact, you could almost say I'm an ...

It was nice. if it's meant to be monty p language shouldn't it be: "kill 'em! kill 'em!" instead of "kill him!"? I liked it good enough, was worth a ...

wasn't meant to be a talk down to the reader. it's just the way I wrote it, I felt it fit well for the story, the begininng paragraph. sorry you ...