mikepyro

Not bad. You have some points where you bunch up she did this then she did that and she saw kind of lines. These don't pull me in and read ...

Not bad. It's much better than the general crop of dark poetry on here. I loved how you poured your voice into this and kept the strength of the writing ...

I remember this back in the day. very nice little piece. Simplistic and real keep it up, you manage to capture the style and feel without seeming manipulative. Well done!

Really liked it. Simplistic, perhaps too short, as very little is given for us to latch onto. That said, I love that the story is one of death without ending ...

hmmm....I like it. Very simplistic and stylized, yet it gives clear emotion and beauty in its words. I must say that I don't care for the last two lines, I ...

I am Bob. I am Bob. My name is Bob. Although yesterday it was Harvey, and tomorrow it will be Randall, for now my name is Bob. Each day I ...

Un little piece. Good work!

It is almost sickeningly cute lol. Most cute poems try and swing by on mediocre rhymes and sunshine but you add a little touch of darkness like the best childrenlike ...

I found the Lack of punctuation a bit distracting as the piece isn't about the scarce emotion or voice but rather the overall beauty of the imagery you paint. I ...

A rather short song bit perhaps best due to the darker nature of the piece. I find that some of the rhymes are a bit iffy when rea aloud, however ...

Hi, name's Mike. Used to be a member of the site back in 2009 but just stopped after I moved on to college, got a review on my email from ...

Not neccessarily a poem, more a prose story, but I feel it fits better under the poetry type due to the nature of the writing and words. And yes, the ...

It's solid, but def coil be improved. Fr too much time is spent a a summary of why the main character knows ether than letting events play out. Also, fly ...

It's pretty good. Not nearly as amazing as most people say, maybe it's too teen drama at some points for my taste, but it's a good movie. Great acting an ...

This could be great. As of now it's only good. First, the length, it's rediculous, for this type of tale emotion must be punchy and lasting, but delivered over time. ...