mikepyro

All good and well, but a piece should stand on it's own. Which this does though. Good luck on the novel. I finished mine a couple months back and have ...

I agree the piece has fantastic flow and voice brought to life with emotion and pain. The lines flow one to another without really tripping over themselves even as I ...

"You make yourself the victim," you hissed at me. You were my sister, and stayed by my side rarely. But it's not like you're a martyr either. And you say ...

Gotta agree with the idea of the tears. I think if she didn't cry it would feel a whole less melodramatic. Maybe they just well up at the end? I ...

There's six f words in the entire 12 page story, not one every other paragraph. Your reviews are seen by everyone who reads my piece and I don't want false ...

This is a very unique piece. Honestly, I truly enjoyed it. There's heart and depth to the words in spite of the humorously quirky undertones. Far too often pieces try ...

Glad you Enjoyed it but There aren't many grammar errors at all. I shall go through again editing as I always do several times before posting. Considering the length I ...

“-and once you get used to all the screaming it’s not such a big deal.” I glanced up from my trance and returned to my conversation with Gary, the demon ...

Probably the best comedy I've ever done. Went all out on this epic journey. Comedy, drama, action, romance, it's all here! Enjoy and thanks so much for reading! It was ...

It's a decent story, some genuine points of emotion break in through the story of the mom. I feel the story is both too short and too long in that ...

Thanks smylin, some mighty big praise there. :) glad you enjoyed it.

Haven't done as much lately. Finished my novel. Got an agent requesting pages so heres hoping. Write drama, horror, comedy, thriller, some prose and scripts. Basically anything. :)

  May be a tad long, but you will not regret it. I promise you. Split into eight acts. Four acts of revenge, three events leading to the betrayal, and ...

Much better than I'd expected. Powerful and structured so well. You create a very proffesional style and a restrained voice that runs through the piece. I really felt you kept ...

Wow this is beautiful. Almost too perfect, like a painting. You took an incredible picture here! Love it!