mikepyro

ir you're not too busy I'd really apreciate a review for the first chapter of my novel Animal. :)

well from a lyrical rhyme perspective the piece can stumble several times, but I viewed this more as a prose piece. The words are striking, haunting in both their simplicity ...

John and Roy approach Lawton. The ride has passed in silence with no words spoken. None needed be. Early rays of brilliant sunlight pierce the sky. The bustle of Lawton ...

def the best of your work I've seen. Excellent shading, facial features, and the body and shading look superb. I do agree the feet are a tad thin, kinda like ...

As always excellent work with expression and the smaller details. Personally I didn't find anything wrong with the cape. I agree with the above reviewers that the body limbs are ...

I'd very much appreciate a review of my piece The Yellow Sheets. It's 12+, but I think that should be okay for you. :pirate3: (Because Pirates make everything better)

John turns at the sound of the door opening. Rose passes through the archway. "Rose, where have you been? I was worried sick." John holds her close and kisses the ...

John pulls his horse to a stop beside the carriage and dismounts. The town of Garrison sits far behind, reduced to a black spot on the horizon. Jesse steps down ...

What am I doing? I'm in the middle of a room. My house. Okay, that's the where, now the why. I'm naked, bottom half, totally buffing it. Why am I ...

Gabriel crosses the threshold of Father Maxwell's home. The door lies on the floor exposing the house to the twisting desert wind. Sand blows through the doorway, spreading across the ...

"It seems we have visitors," Peter says. Gabriel stands still, eyes locked upon the fellow priest, wary of turning away. Peter catches the glimpse of fear in Gabriel's eyes. He ...

Father Peter sits behind his desk marking passages in a tattered bible. He closes the book and removes the reading glasses from his strained eyes, rubbing his hands through his ...

The Tall Man sits alone in his tent. Outside, the rumble of his men’s partying and drinking can be heard. The Rider, however, is in no mood for festivities. His ...

Scooby Doo on Zombie Island?! AWWWWWWW YEEAAAAAAAH! Thanks for the flashbacks. I really enjoyed reading this piece. And so much of it reflects my own experience with the books and ...

she mutter --- muttered in to bed --- into bed i liked this. simple and humorous and a neat idea. honestly I'd end it without the "signing off, alarm clock" ...