mikemehr16

Hey Paul, thanks for the comments on The Shed. Could you please read the story and comment? The formatting should be fixed in my reply post. I've come here to ...

The Shed I looked out the window, thinking about the past and rocking softly. Wicker smooth through years of use held me up.  The sun blazed with an eager red ...

Formatting is jacked...sorry readers. Be as honest as possible. There's no such thing as a critique that is too harsh.

The Shed I looked out the window, thinking about the past and rocking softly. Wicker smooth through years of use held me up.  The sun blazed with an eager red ...