mikelancaster

i have to say that jealousy is a hard subject to tackle and i think you have something here, its a little wordy but thats not really a problem. go ...

hello what i read there was trying to bounce i could feel where it was trying to go but it didnt quite make it for some reason i can only ...

i knocked this together in about 20minutes a few months ago i like it i suppose, what do you guys think? I had a vision and the walls were falling, ...

i think this might make more sense if you punctuate it?

i must be the strangest person in the world i sit down with a pen and a piece of paper and i put myself into a situation much as you ...

good work *thumbs up* my only advise would be to be a little more precise with your wording if you do you could write some fantastic stuff

hmm... i dont know what to think but im thinking hard you made the right decision to keep it short it deffinetly adds to the impact it shows you can ...

thats an interesting one, ive never heard the song its based upon but none the less i like it the smaller sections have a good ring to them maybe the ...

Can you see the lights are fading Another sadistic innocence was lost, And here i am to pick up the pieces Please call me a saint. All i wanted was ...

hello, im Mike so feel free to call me Mike =) im new to the site and stuff so i thought id say hello polite =) ive been writing for ...