midnightsundancer

I thought it was rather pretty. Good job. Keep writing.

Lovely. I really liked it. It was incredibly well for being written in Five minutes. You gave clear emotion and imagery. It was very nice and a rather enjoyable piece ...

The first day of our 'relationship' was perfect. Absolutely, incredibly, one hundred percent perfect! We chatted and got to know each other a little better and flirted a bit. Some ...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. The story and emotion behind the whole piece is irreplaceable and there is nothing that I believe needs to be fixed. Its very emotional and it makes ...

Wow. Just... Wow. Incredible. Its truly beautiful and I love it. I wish to know, what is your inspiration? What is your Motivation? I can not believe it. This piece ...

OK, here's the deal. I love the idea and creativity behind the story but I'm not too sure about the way it's written. I think that it is a very ...

I find the creativity of the plot very interesting. I wish to see more because I love it. Also, for a first story, I thought it was rather enticing and ...

When I walked into school that day I had no idea as to what was about to befall my already stressed and childish young teen mind. See, I have never ...

Incredible! Is there a sequel? Its truly beautiful! The conflicting personalities and the wonderful plot kept me entertained the whole time. You must write a sequel if you haven't already! ...

Thats such a sweet story. I love the part where she finally gets her dream. :) I'm sorry, but I love romance stories and a good one is hard to ...