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"Geez, Peyton right now im in the business of misery. Right now I want to take it from the top due to this day." "you know Sarah she has got ...

i 2nd Helen!

Very good! I loved it! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No need to critique!

This is very good.Or great. But it's confusing. You think she loves jake first and then shes sorta hates or fears him.?

Actually, this is a very good topic. And yes i would love to do that to bullies. I hate them. But you need to not use so much anger. Maybe ...

wow awesome

How about a sort of punk girl that has problems with her life but uses her transforming into a werewolf to run away. NAME:Ally AGE:17 GENDER:Female RACE:White ABILITY:Transforming into a ...

omg this is awesome

This is my summary to my book Live Life and Love. Beth is a 9Th grader at her new high school ,Jefferson High School, in Edgewater, Colorado. She is very ...

That was entirely good.but it needs to be moved topoetry collunm. Good job!

This is really good buts its alittle depressing. It needs more life to it. But anyways good job!!!!

gosh poeple what is your problem it was her first try and she has never written oetry before and + shes my supprotive. why do so many poeple have to ...

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wow, that was very good.i have no need to critiqoe this for except NOTHING!!!!!!lol good job anyways!:) -midnightsun10135

i am beig bella so i can have edward all to my self lol.hehe