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Re: Sugar rush
Hi linerider I like this story and I think it's a really good idea. I like the way that he is a millionaires kid and he probably has lived in ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Suggestions Needed!
I would recommend the Daniel-X series. It's by the same author as Maximum Ride and is about a boy who sees his parents be killed by an alien and then ...
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Re: The crash
Hi asxz I really like the way this story is going but I saw a few small mistakes so I would advise re-reading your story and working out the kinks. ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Knights of Dawn Prolouge/Pilot
Hi Way2Dawn I like this story and I think it's really good. I saw a few mistakes but I think you can sort out those mistakes if you just re-read ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Swordmaster's Path
Hi brassnbridle I really like this story, I think it has an interesting beginning and I can't wait for more. I can't see any mistakes but I'd advise re-reading it ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 2 of 2)
Hi GoldenQuill I really love this story. I'm completely hocked. Can you pm me when you post more? Thanks. Right, time to nit-pick. I actually can't find anything wrong with ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 1 of 2)
Hi GoldenQuill Thanks for the pm. I really like the way this story is progressing but I think you should re-read it as there are a few mistakes, nothing major ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Thomas & Falice (Collection) 1
Hi EliteHusky I do like, you were right. I think the story is good but it tends to jump around a lot, so I don't quite understand it. I also ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Doctor Two 2
Hi What has the Doctor done to get his picture in shops? And is the Gwen he is talking to, the Gwen on Torchwood? I only saw on e problem ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Doctor Two
Hi EliteHusky I like this post. I want to know why the Doctor is in London on Boxing Day, has an alien invaded or something, and I want to know ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Doctor Who: The Dalek Doctor Continued 2
HI EliteHusky I like this part as much as the first part and I can't wait for you to post more. I think that you may have missed out some ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: The Elemental Lands Part 1
Hi Allessandre I like this post. It's sort and sweet but I hope you're going to write more since it's really good. I like the way that the people are ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Maurata
Hi, I also noticed the spelling mistakes but they will be easy to sort out if you just re-read your post. I think the plot is, but that is a ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: The Battle: Prologue
Hi tRick I really like it and its got me hocked. I want to know who she was visiting and what the job was. I haven't got any nit-picks. Can ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Hi I just got told off for laughing so much and its all your fault!!!!! I'm joking. I love this script, I'm a Twilight lover but I think what you ...
Feb 23, 2010
