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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sugar rush

    Hi linerider I like this story and I think it's a really good idea. I like the way that he is a millionaires kid and he probably has lived in ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Suggestions Needed!

    I would recommend the Daniel-X series. It's by the same author as Maximum Ride and is about a boy who sees his parents be killed by an alien and then ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The crash

    Hi asxz I really like the way this story is going but I saw a few small mistakes so I would advise re-reading your story and working out the kinks. ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Knights of Dawn Prolouge/Pilot

    Hi Way2Dawn I like this story and I think it's really good. I saw a few mistakes but I think you can sort out those mistakes if you just re-read ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Swordmaster's Path

    Hi brassnbridle I really like this story, I think it has an interesting beginning and I can't wait for more. I can't see any mistakes but I'd advise re-reading it ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 2 of 2)

    Hi GoldenQuill I really love this story. I'm completely hocked. Can you pm me when you post more? Thanks. Right, time to nit-pick. I actually can't find anything wrong with ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 1 of 2)

    Hi GoldenQuill Thanks for the pm. I really like the way this story is progressing but I think you should re-read it as there are a few mistakes, nothing major ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Thomas & Falice (Collection) 1

    Hi EliteHusky I do like, you were right. I think the story is good but it tends to jump around a lot, so I don't quite understand it. I also ...

    Mar 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Doctor Two 2

    Hi What has the Doctor done to get his picture in shops? And is the Gwen he is talking to, the Gwen on Torchwood? I only saw on e problem ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Doctor Two

    Hi EliteHusky I like this post. I want to know why the Doctor is in London on Boxing Day, has an alien invaded or something, and I want to know ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Doctor Who: The Dalek Doctor Continued 2

    HI EliteHusky I like this part as much as the first part and I can't wait for you to post more. I think that you may have missed out some ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Elemental Lands Part 1

    Hi Allessandre I like this post. It's sort and sweet but I hope you're going to write more since it's really good. I like the way that the people are ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Maurata

    Hi, I also noticed the spelling mistakes but they will be easy to sort out if you just re-read your post. I think the plot is, but that is a ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Battle: Prologue

    Hi tRick I really like it and its got me hocked. I want to know who she was visiting and what the job was. I haven't got any nit-picks. Can ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Breaking Dawn Parody

    Hi I just got told off for laughing so much and its all your fault!!!!! I'm joking. I love this script, I'm a Twilight lover but I think what you ...

    Feb 23, 2010


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