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Re: What Happened to Bill Beck
I like it but I found this sentence a little confusing. so I drug my reluctant feet a few steps closer I think it should be so I dragged my ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Bioshock: Tenenbaum's Assistant (Chapter 1)
Hi Howler I like the story a lot but I think The calmness and the confusion I had when I woke up changed to panic and worry should change to ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The Black Wolf (Chapt. 1 / Part 4)
I like it especially the way you tell the reader about how the mc was born. I can't wait for more so can you pm me when you post some ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Silver Blade Chapter Two
I really like it. I'm not going to nit-pick because I'm not very good at it. I've read what you've put up so far and I can't wait for you ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Knife of Purest Intent - Chap. 1
I like this. I like the title, I think that's what drew me to read. I'm not sure how But I could tell the MC was a girl really early ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 11
I love The Experiment and I hope you post more soon. I am dying to know what happens to Wren, Knight and Tommy. I read the chapters this afternoon and ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Night Terrors
I think Night Terrors is good but it is very very creepy at the same time but that's not a bad thing. I liked the way you showed that something ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter One (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
I really like it GoldenQuill and I can't wait for more. I want to know how he got an arrow stuck in hs side and what the gift is. I'm ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: The Black Wolf (Chapt. 1 / Part 3)
I really like the story so far. I like the way you make it so that she is almost an outcast just because she was born. I think it has ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Swing Chapter 2
I like it Ledge. I take it that it is what happened to Lila before 18 sick years of her life happened (I hope that makes sense). Reading this chapter ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Blue Ice Fire...chapter 2:
I love the beginings of this book. I can't wait for the rest. I'm not going to nit-pick since I can't be bothered and I'm sure someone else will. Can ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
I really liked it. I think its better than any of the other Cinderella retakes I've read. I like the twist at the end with princess and I liked the ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Samrai (First Installment)
Nice Ledge I like it and it's changed quite a bit since I read it at school. I do have to agree with pretty much everyone else and say that ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Escaping the Whisper Chpt 1
:thud: Hi I think that the chapter is amazing and I want to read the rest. I like the way you link to the past and then how you come ...
Jan 14, 2010