midnighteardrops

Thanks for all the comments, as you all can tell spelling and grammar aren't my strong points :s Most of my post's aren't that great so i appreciate all suggestions ...

It's really good but i'm a little confused. So the guy leaves then returns then leaves? and why cant she get him out (and out of what)? But besides that ...

You got that feeling again, it's deep inside it's not sympathy or anger it comes when you make a joke then the room goes quite and you get strange looks ...

Thanks to all for the reviews. I've never really had anyone read any of my poems, and I'm really enjoying the feedback. The puddles thing was a complete mistake, and ...

Lets Listen to the sound of the rain Jump in the puddles puddles Laugh till we cant breath Alone time isn't good for the heart So lets not let each ...

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on the 'emo' part. I definitely don't want to sound whinny.:) Anyone eles want to help me it seems kind of off and i ...

Really good! You should think about maybe making the song a little longer. You have talent keep workng on it!!

Before you go you should know... I waited for him all night, But he never came I cried for him, But he never cared I looked for him, But he ...

Really good story dont rush through the scenes. Give detail and defenitly persue something with Nick. WOW your amazing!! Dont ever doubt your self you have major talent. Keep wrighting ...