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midnightblack

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The light of heaven and the fire of hell.

    i needed someone to clear it up thx :D and yeah ima noob so im getting the hang of it

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The light of heaven and the fire of hell.

    um i guess you can call it a paragraph did i put it in the wrong category.....? >.>

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The light of heaven and the fire of hell.

    From my point of view it seems like all this seems to all go together. But i don't know maybe you have a different idea thank you for reading. ^.^ ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I Slept Alone

    well this poem is very interesting i think i can picture what you mean the thing your trying to express it has to do with pain and sorrow but i ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Moonboy

    He picked up a leaf and held it in the air. Little bugs were crawling. The first thing to mention is that this poem is very original and beautiful so ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Of Melody and Death

    Her death is vomit as she sings The wind knows her song all too well Calls out to dance a lovely spell Her husband marches to the beat Their love ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cold Nights

    ok i revised it and edited it hope its better. ^.^

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cold Nights

    heh yeah grammar wasnt always my strong point like i really suck at english. -.- but ill work on it thank you

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: When We First Met

    Its short and sweet the first thing i noticed was this seems like first love. When u learn how to play with fire. If you can make it a little ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Winter

    this poem explains winter very clearly and i love the part love is timeless as the snow :) means alot to me

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Standing alone

    very true poem its true it comes from that part of the heart that knows it isnt being treated right by everyone else and the situation is common the thing ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cold Nights

    Those cold nights without you are back. When the air is crisp and dry, but your lips are moist. The only warmth I can get is when I hold hand, ...

    Nov 30, 2010


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