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Re: The setting sun
Sand coat our feet Waves lick our toes As we peer out to the horizon A globe of fire Paint hues to the sky Showers of it's red light shadowing ...
Mar 2, 2007 -
Re: NO TITLE YET
There, she saw herself looking back at her. She was an attractive 12 year old. So, she wasn't paticularly pretty. She wasn't ugly either. She looked at the reflection of ...
Mar 1, 2007 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
i added and edited some stuff and i'm sorry about my capitalization...lolz --- Standing in the dark alone pondering over my confusion there's no way home i have no solutions ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Haikus
That was... strangely unique. I didn't quite get it. The description of each of your topics was pretty much complete and valid. That's good. I mean, describing something so complex ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Gorrath: Part 2 released.
That was pretty good. Well, first of all, I have something I'd like to say. ONE: I like how the "section" doesn't give to much information about anything. You know ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Hayden and Rowan of Venice: Chapter 1
Well, it's not at the part yet. The important part. Then you'll see why she remembered 'the event'. Thnx for the tips! i'll keep that in mind while I write. ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: The River
I luv this! It's so, mysterious and exotic! So...Wonderous! It's really hard to put it in words but it so strange! No, not strange, UNIQUE! I really paints a vivid ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: An Optical Illusion
Optical Illusion Maybe you're just a shining star Peeking out from behind the moon And maybe you're nothing but An empty space Maybe you're a miracle That blew in the ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Hayden and Rowan of Venice: Chapter 1
This is first chapter of my story, after the prologue! Hope you like it! This takes us back through time, about 9 years to when I was 4. I had ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Hayden and Rowan of Venice
thnx guys! Yea, as you can tell, I'm only 10... very sad! LOL I don't know names of girls in Venice... Any suggestions? Italian names? anything? victoria? margaret? :) I ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Hayden and Rowan of Venice
If you like it, I'll write more of it, because this is just the beginning. PLEASE REPLY! :wink: Hayden looked unhapppily out of her bedroom window. If only a prince ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: alone ( you left )
I agree! It was very depressing. but it shows strong "moody-ness" and it's pretty much focused. It did bounced from idea to idea a little. I liked your song. because ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: The Postman Comes Looking For Us
OMG! well, i only read a part. This was pretty good. Washing your hair in the toilet shows humor but seriously, that it kinda gross. it's not necessary to take ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Lost at Sea dedicated to my BFF's, and close people that i've shared the best with! when I first met you I knew we were a pair we could get ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Take It In
Take it in Verse 1: I’m whizzing through my life Can’t remember what happened to me Yes, it went by so fast I didn’t even see I skimmed across the ...
Feb 24, 2007
