michellel96

I couldn't think of a good title yet, and there's more too it, I'll add it lata! ---- I sat in the attic of our house. Dust wafted everywhere and ...

I really liked this a lot so yayz for you :) I was fifteen again, bouncing along the back roads to the beach in our puke-green Suburban. Against Dad’s better ...

HOlas jin and wtf. lol it was actually kinda good...creepy good. LOL It's unique...but i like it a lot. yayz for you. sys. lolz

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hehehehe me like this :) lol moosie

The young girl huddled in the corner, nightgown torn to shreds. Long strands of blonde hair covered her horrified face. Beads of sweat trickled down and stung her eyes. A ...

Toes tickled with sand Waves licking my feet I wade into the water Seaweed and rocks knee-deep I sit upon the shore Seagulls cackling like wild It's my haven, my ...

Toes tickled with sand Waves licking my feet I wade into the water Seaweed and rocks knee-deep I sit upon the shore Seagulls cackling like wild It's my haven, my ...

NOTE: I have finally figured out the title of "NO TITLE"! :) This is chapter 3 cont. HOPE YOU LIKE IT! :D Walking in the Gypsy Woods was just like ...

NO really, this isn't half-bad. I mean, not the best poem I've ever read, but you're on the way! Couple of suggestions, but otherwise, not bad for your first poem. ...

The cold cobblestone streets were caked with newly-fresh mud from the rain that stuck to Dawn's flip-flops. Now ever step she felt as if she had to pull her feet ...

Hiya! Thnx for the comments and suggestions. I'll keep that in mind. for what you said about "Not enough description", this is actually chapter 2 and I have more description ...

Hi! Me again. this was good, a bit mind-boggling but good in all. It was kind of as if it were in a code that only some people can understand. ...

Chapter 2 New feelings Dawn had finished all her homework at Study Hall. Bored as she was, she figured she would enjoy the small load of studying. She would adapt ...

There's not always someone To take your call There's not always someone To catch you when you fall You have no harness No safety net below Take the plunge And ...