mhutch1995

The beginning of the chapter did a good job establishing suspense. I like the fact that you added the detail of the gas station, whether it was needed or not. ...

This is interesting, to say the least. I would agree that some of the points you make in this work are valid, but all of the negatives to this piece ...

I enjoyed reading this! It was interesting throughout, and the way the characters communicate is very plausible (if you're a teenage rebel who enjoys disobeying your parents, that is.) There ...

[quote="twiggers"] Just incase you a newbe in the awesome adventures of Max (that's me) and her feathered friends, there's six... sorry, five of us... Seems a little bit odd to ...

At first glance, I found this piece a little bit confusing. But after the second time through, and reading what paladin said, I began to understand. This is an extremely ...