mhutch1995

A short little poem I just put together. I don't often write poetry, but I thought I might give it a try. Hope you like it. I know you're angry ...

The beginning of the chapter did a good job establishing suspense. I like the fact that you added the detail of the gas station, whether it was needed or not. ...

This is interesting, to say the least. I would agree that some of the points you make in this work are valid, but all of the negatives to this piece ...

I enjoyed reading this! It was interesting throughout, and the way the characters communicate is very plausible (if you're a teenage rebel who enjoys disobeying your parents, that is.) There ...

[quote="twiggers"] Just incase you a newbe in the awesome adventures of Max (that's me) and her feathered friends, there's six... sorry, five of us... Seems a little bit odd to ...

TheNewHero, I greatly appreciate all of the time you spent to help me with my work. I plan on following your advice when it comes to writing more of the ...

At first glance, I found this piece a little bit confusing. But after the second time through, and reading what paladin said, I began to understand. This is an extremely ...

This is my first post to this website. I'm not sure how this site works or even if this is the right place to post this, but I figured I ...