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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hurtful smiles

    Hey. I think June got most of the errors. And, I don't really have any either. I have to say I really liked this and I hope you expand on ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    So, Meep(: mentioned the main rules so I'll explain colors. You may notice some people have colored user names, here's a little guide: Light Blue: Greeters, they greet new members ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    9/10. I especially like the second one. :)

    May 28, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Rate the song above you!

    I listened to the first one, I liked it. 7/10. I'll pick two of my favorites from right now. Marching Bands of Manhattan by Death Cab For Cutie Secret Crowds ...

    May 28, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Another Teen Pregnancy Story, Part 2

    I must say, I have no complaints for this story. I read the first part and now this part really adds to it. You see Mick's love for Kat even ...

    May 28, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Question

    Thanks :)

    May 28, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Question

    Ok, so whenever I write on Microsoft word, it always corrects me when I say "laid," it says I should use "lay." Now, I always write in past tense, and ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: new

    Hey, ariella. Welcome to YWS. We're real friendly here. Let me lay down the main rules for you: :arrow: The 2:1 ratio. This means, for every piece of work you ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Celebrity Crushes? *giggle giggle*

    Who's that guy from Becoming Jane? Erm... Oh! James McAvoy. He's way too old for me, but he was really attractive in that movie.

    May 27, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Redemption. Part One

    OK. So, I did post some of this in the regular forums, but as I got farther and changed some things. I decided I didn't want to post it in ...

    May 26, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: THEM

    Hey! I finished it! I put comments in red, and I put some overall comments at the end. I really enjoyed reading it.

    May 25, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: THEM

    Hey, I'd like to take a crack at this. You'll have to give me a few days, considering this is longer then a normal review. I'll hopefully be done in ...

    May 25, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Character Name Help...

    Out of the names you like, I like Annabelle or Carlina. But, since you like names with L's here you go: Lindsay Lacy Lorelei Lainey (Could be used as a ...

    May 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Golden Locks

    Wow! That was so creepy. At first I thought that it was going to be this father that missed his daughter, but I was wrong. That gave me chills, seriously. ...

    May 24, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A year and A Half

    Hey! So, I'm going to review this. Maybe the other parts too, if you don't mind. This was a nice beginning, I liked it. So, cotton got a lot of ...

    May 24, 2009


Love is so short, forgetting is so long.
— Pablo Neruda