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Hi, Sakura! I'm here to review your work today. So, here you go :): He said, running a hand through his perfect blonde surfer hair. Never say perfect. I don't ...

OK, so I have a little problem. I was thinking of writing my novel with multiple first person narrators. You know, having one person's POV one chapter and a different ...

I think most writers have felt this way at least once before. I know that I have and it really is very frustrating. To overcome it, I usually read, listen ...

Well, I get the house to myself today. I got an Itunes card. I might get ice cream when my parents get home.

I haven't been on any vacations nearly as good as those. :) But, I have been to Colorado and that was really fun. We went to the mountains and visited ...

Hey! Well, welcome to YWS. It's nice to have you. So, you've read the FAQs? Good. Well, I guess some advice would be to just look around and find things ...

Hey, Maneechan! Welcome to YWS. There's only one thing that I could really add, I guess. And that's the star system. You get stars by reviewing/critiquing. Here's a guide: 5 ...

Probably just Colleen or Sunshine ('cause that's my nickname.) :)

I use basically the same stuff, except I use "muttered" and "murmured", too.

Well, I had to take mine to drastic measures. Which was really hard for me because I hoard my works. But, I picked one and I deleted the rest of ...

Hmm...Annie would probably start crying, and after that she'd probably try to find a logical reason for why this would've happened, then try to convince everyone that it's her. She'd ...

Hey! I don't know if anyone mentioned this rule but: :arrow: Rate your work, it something has graphic scenes or the f-word. Please rate it R. If your work is ...

Hey, Master. I guess I should say welcome to YWS and I'm going to review this for you. :) I'll give you some grammar nitpicks and then some feedback at ...

7/10. It's interesting and cool. Though I had to look up the word "dirge." :oops:

Haha, I actually really liked these. But, I read all of them so long ago I can barely remember them. I just know I liked them and my favorite person ...