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Well, it's funny, I've never read the books but, a friend of mine read all of them and got Extras. I asked her if it was good and she said ...

I just joined recently to! It's so fun to read and review others people's work. I love getting advice on my writing. I guess one rule I always stick to ...

Haha that was so cute. Addie reminds me of this girl I knew in kindergarden haha. I loved the ending. It made me laugh.

Hey I'm new. I just joined yesterday but haven't posted on this forum yet. I have reviewed a few stories so far and have submitted a prolouge to one of ...

I really liked it and it kept my interest. Keep it up! :D

I thought it was really good and interesting. You're a good writer and you use good descriptive words. It's much better then anything I could do. Good job and keep ...

This is a prologue to a story I'm writing. I just wanted to see if anybody found it at all interesting. Please comment if you wish. So read on... (by ...

I liked that story. It kept my interest the whole time, unlike others I have read. The description of the girl was great when you were talking about how her ...

I agree with PippieDooda you could elaborate on how the shop looks inside. That would add more interest. So far it's really good. Keep it up I'm interested. :D

Hey that was pretty good, maybe you could elaborate just a little more on who some of the people are. But other then that it was good! Keep it up. ...