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Okay... 1.I'm listening to Guilty Pleasure by Cobra Starship 2.The most played song on my ipod is Vegas by all time low. 3.I hate that store called Woodmans it's cold ...

Dying. I'm so scared of dying. There was a point in my life where I couldn't go to sleep because I believed I wouldn't wake up. I would also think ...

Thanks for the review I'll fix some things and try to make it more realistic. Thanks for the help :)

Okay so this is the third part of my story, or I guess it would be probably the start of Chapter Two if it were in book form. So I ...

This is good! Just a few things... The wind met her and blew with such force it seemed to be forcing her back; [s]see[/s] she ignored it and headed for ...

Well... the story I'm writing now was influenced my a TV show I was watching. A woman had HIV and I decided to take that to a different leval and ...

Oh my gosh! I loved this! I'm in gymnastics and I love when people write about it and stuff and admire it because it is such a difficult sport. Awesome ...

This was pretty good! Now on to the critique. “Kristy, would you please come up and see me” Miss Candy asked me. Miss Candy is one of the science teachers ...

This was really good and only slightly depressing, but good. So here are a few nitpicks I found... "Well what's wrong with that?" he said, half to himself. "It's just ...

Honestly it's good. It just needs more depth and more emotion. It's kind of cliche you know? If you add more emotion and power to the lines I think it ...

This is a very good story, but a few nitpicks... “Oh you know what, Maria,” Rob inhaled noisily, “go fuck yourself… or him! Whichever you want.” The correct way would ...

Wow this is really good, I can't really find anything to say. Yeah, so I was bored and just looking page after page of the 'other fiction' category and I ...

This is edited. If you didn't read the first one you should consider it because it does give some of the plot and storyline. If you don't feel like reading ...

The numbers really confused me. They honestly were not needed, they were quite distracting. Overall, this poem was really nice and well written, keep writing poems because they are very ...

ha ha. I play Sims all the time and I totally relate. I get so mad when they take so long to do every little chore. Just for the laugh ...