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Re: Llama Boy
I liked this, honestly I did. But, I think it would be better if Jesse took Mrs. Hamilton's place and could talk to Rylee. I don't know why, but since ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 4
Okay, I'm ready to review this now. I'm not too much of a grammar freak but I'll show a few things. “You look amazing” he said smiling at her. Comma ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: One Last Chance
You can totally make something out of this. Lukas remind me of someone in one of my stories, but that person was alive. So anyways, you can make something out ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I was cracking up at my house and everyone thought I was crazed. I love the books but that was funny when Bella was like "You shot me," and he ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Without You. Chapter one part two.
This is kind of long. But, I have a few chapters of it written on my computer so I had to find a good part to stop that it wouldn't ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 4
I'm really tired right I will probably review this later. But It's really good! Okay? Just had to make sure you knew that! Okay, I'll review this later, pinky swear.
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Finding You
Hey, I really liked this! It was a great plot, and I wished it was longer. So...onto the review. She said to the little blonde hair blue eyed girl. It ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Without You. *Edited.*
I know I made some random mistakes because I was deleting stuff and then I was adding things. So I forgot some words that I should've deleted. Thanks for the ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Simple Snow Day
Alright, Then a smile spread across my face when I uttered the words. Snow day. Change it too A smile spread across my face when I uttered the words, "Snow ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Six Days
I really liked this. It was different, something I had never really read before. It was different for someone to write in the point of view of the creepy, stalker ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Piano Lessons
I really liked this. I just wanted to know the boys name. It was really good, keep it up! If you continue it PM me.
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Without You. *Edited.*
New story, please comment, I would like to improve it. It's just an idea got it off the show I watched about poor kids in the Appalachian mountains That morning ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Boys VS Girls
OK let's see... Name: Ashley Brown Age:8 Magical Skill: She is telepathic. She can move or bend any object with her mind. Job in war: She is a helper to ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Favorite Books You Read This Year
Well.... this could take awhile. I'll just list the ones I liked... Twilight New Moon Eclipse Breaking Dawn All the private novels (series of 8 with a new one coming ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Musical Influences
This is like the perfect thing for me! I HAVE to listen to music when I write. I listen to pop punk when I write. My Cobra Starship and All ...
Feb 5, 2009
