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This is the part of the first chapter, read and review please. You may need to read the prologue. Waking up was never an easy thing to do for me, ...

Hey! I think you'll like it here. Just remember to use proper English. Some members can get annoyed it you use things like "lol" or "omg" or stuff you would ...

Hey! Welcome, I might just check out some of your posts later. I'm not big on poetry either mostly because I'm bad at it and probably wouldn't be able to ...

Hey welcome Katrina. There is a girl at my school that spells it Cathrina but it is the same name. I find that strange but anyways...welcome. It's a lot of ...

Hey Makayla! Yeah, I know most people think it's easy to get a book published and become famous. I too have learned that it's not as easy as writing a ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. So, on to the review... Gently she moves towards you, her eyes peering into, you burning you almost. Okay, I think you should remove the comma ...

It looks like in one of the pictures the mustache is gone. The hair is hot though. Not the mustache, it's icky.

I LOVE THE OFFICE. I just got an episode on my IPod yippee!!

Well for a guy it's Chase: It sounds so kind (to me) yet mysterious and adventurous. For a girl it's Dakota: It's a sweet and innocent, but it also sounds ...

It's cool, wait? Didn't I rate yours before? Well it's still cool yay for you!

I like yours they are so...real! 9/10

Yeah actually, I am 13. TPBM: Prefers movies over books.

I don't know when you posted this but it might've been awhile ago, but I'm still going to review it. Love this! You review mine, I review yours. This was ...

I did that in my novel once. It added to the characters stuggle in life I thought.

You should write in the POV of an endangered animal. Then you could explain what it's like to be one of the few on the animal's kind. I think that ...