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Hey! First real post, that's exciting. So does this mean I'm the first real person to review your first real post? Well, I'm honored. Okay, enough with that. My fixes ...

You made me cry! Oh my gosh! I'm like a total tree/animal hugger. I cry at those commercials on TV when their like "Thousands of animals are abused and for ...

Hi! Well, you've reviewed something of mine before and I loved your reviews so here it is. Title: Another Sunset: Chapter One Part Two Genre: Other Fiction Brief Summary: A ...

8/10 It was funny and I understood it. Sometimes I don't understand peoples signature...

I picked other because.... My favorite is the Private Series by Kate Brian. I like them because...they have romance, murder, drama, friendship, and did I mention drama all in every ...

Hi! This was very good and very desciptive. So, here's my critique. My fixes are in bold. My comments are in italics. I don't feel like doing the separate quotes ...

Well Monki covered all the rules basically so I don't have to...yay. So, you're new here and that's cool. I think you'll fit in well. Have fun and welcome!

Hey! This is the next part. I posted the other parts, so you might want to read them. So, please review, I want to improve this! I stared at Mark ...

I'll just forget the obvious...like gender/race. Eyes and outfit probably.

I still think it's good! Onto the critique... I flinched when my contact connected with my eye but it was in I blinked a couple of times until it was ...

Hi and welcome. I think you'll have a lot of fun here! I guess you could call me the welcoming community. I'm supposed to tell you some rules so I ...

Okay. Name: Luke Brookes Country: England Age: 14 Appearance: Gender: Male History: He isn't rich and was rather poor. He depended on his best friend Carlie. His dad abused him ...

Hi Nicole, or Ariana or Seth. Haha, that made me laugh. Anyways, I guess you could call me the welcoming committee. So welcome! Since you're telling about your favorite band ...

Wow this is so...dramatic. I really liked it! When I enjoy a story I tend to not pay attention to grammar and to be honest I'm not so good at ...

Okay! Name: Dakota Abbott Age: 14 Grade: 8 Appearance: (Is it okay if I just do a picture?) Personality: Fun, bubbly, outgoing, popular. The kind of girl everybody strives to ...