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This was very good. There was so much detail which I really enjoyed. I think the concept of the story was very interesting and it leaves me wanting to know ...

Sounds interesting. I'd read it, you should write it.

Pale, blue/green eyes. Dirty blonde hair. Short and frail.

This was a truly touching story and I really enjoyed it. I didn't see many grammar errors. It's a true story right? It was so sweet how one trip to ...

Dakota hurried through the building to her History class. It was her favorite class, Chase was in it. She desperately wanted to see his smile, and hear his beautiful voice. ...

Hi, could you review this for me... This is Chapter One Part Three...you can skim through the other parts but don't feel like you have to review them. Here's some ...

Hello! Would you be so kind and review part of my story? It's the most recent part so If you want to read the other parts you can but I'll ...

I hugged myself as I walked to my house. It had gotten colder. I kept walking thinking about the days events. When I walked in my door my mom was ...

Okay! Name: Lizzy Meyers Age: 13 Gender: Female Background: On the plane to visit her parents. She went to a boarding school so she wanted to see them. Personality: Talkative, ...

~Luke and Carlie. The figure had stopped not far from them, "Seems harmless to me," Carlie whispered. Luke kept staring, "Do you think we should go over there?" He asked ...

*musiclover I could probably add you in if you want... your person is the same age as my people so that may work, only if you want though*

Me again. Yay, you must be excited. I just wanted to say that I like this version better. Good Work! Keep writing!

I'm bored...I'm going to add one more part to my part of this story. It's an exciting story. ----------------- "I want people, and not just any people, people our age. ...

"Do you even know where we are?" Carlie Reynolds asked her best friend, Luke Brookes. "No," he replied bitterly and sat down on the road that was cracking and splitting ...

Hey when are you starting this Archer? I'm excited! :)