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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Letting go *edited*

    Okay. You've reviewed like, all my stories and I've never reviewed yours so I am. There weren't many nit-picks and I'm not good at them so I'll just do the ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Archive Re: 2012

    "Well," Carlie muttered. "I say we go for it. But, if you want Peyton to pick she can." Luke nodded and turned to Peyton. "We'll never know what's over there ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Breakdown Chapter One Part One.

    Thanks for all the reviews on the prologue. I've worked on this next part for the past few days so review it please! That morning I was more nervous then ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Not sure: ideas wanted

    Hey new story! Cool! Everybody else did all the nit-picking so I won't. I don't mean to be harsh with what I'm about to say but...the end was a little ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Outcasts

    Alrighty. Name: Kayla Aarons Gender: Female Age: 14 Special ability: She can turn invisable and run really fast. Appearance: She looks young for her age and is short. Personalities: Bubbly ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 5: Eddie's side of the story

    You reviewed my story. So, now I'm reviewing yours! This is a great storyline and it's very interesting. Here's my nit-picks. I felt like a coward breaking up with her ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Do you want something reviewed?

    Hi, well I wanted you to review this. Title: Breakdown Prologue Genre: Other Fiction Word Count: 1,062 Summary: A young girl must return back home after rehab to deal with ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Archive Re: 2012

    Carlie and Luke- Travelers Carlie questioned if Steven was telling the truth. Personally, she didn't want to be the person to make the decision to follow Steven's instructions. "What do ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: What was going through your mind when...

    Well. My friend Miranda told me she might get tickets to this concert online. Here's kind of how it went. It was chat-speak but I'll make it not. Miranda: Guess ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Antigone's Critique Shop

    I'm back. I started something new and I wanted to know what you thought. I did one edit but I'm sure there's more I could do. :) Title: Breakdown: Prologue ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Don't Go Through the Agony of Searching For a Review...

    Hey, I liked the review you did on my last story and I've started a new one. So if you could review it that'd be great. I just did the ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:

    Hey! Could you review this for me? It's a prologue to my new story. If you could help I'd appreciate it!

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What's your favorite qoute?

    I finally thought of more! Well, actually that didn't take that long... 1. "Take me back to the person I used to be? Back when you were there for me? ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Archive Re: Kidnapped 2 - Dead Or Alive

    *Today I changed my power to water elemental. I thought it looked cooler. Just letting you know. :)*

    Mar 5, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Pippiedooda's presents! :)

    Hi, just ignore my last post. I'm taking a break from that story so could you review this? Link: Genre: Other fiction. Thanks!

    Mar 5, 2009


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