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Re: Letting go *edited*
Okay. You've reviewed like, all my stories and I've never reviewed yours so I am. There weren't many nit-picks and I'm not good at them so I'll just do the ...
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Re: 2012
"Well," Carlie muttered. "I say we go for it. But, if you want Peyton to pick she can." Luke nodded and turned to Peyton. "We'll never know what's over there ...
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Re: Breakdown Chapter One Part One.
Thanks for all the reviews on the prologue. I've worked on this next part for the past few days so review it please! That morning I was more nervous then ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Not sure: ideas wanted
Hey new story! Cool! Everybody else did all the nit-picking so I won't. I don't mean to be harsh with what I'm about to say but...the end was a little ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
Alrighty. Name: Kayla Aarons Gender: Female Age: 14 Special ability: She can turn invisable and run really fast. Appearance: She looks young for her age and is short. Personalities: Bubbly ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 5: Eddie's side of the story
You reviewed my story. So, now I'm reviewing yours! This is a great storyline and it's very interesting. Here's my nit-picks. I felt like a coward breaking up with her ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Do you want something reviewed?
Hi, well I wanted you to review this. Title: Breakdown Prologue Genre: Other Fiction Word Count: 1,062 Summary: A young girl must return back home after rehab to deal with ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: 2012
Carlie and Luke- Travelers Carlie questioned if Steven was telling the truth. Personally, she didn't want to be the person to make the decision to follow Steven's instructions. "What do ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: What was going through your mind when...
Well. My friend Miranda told me she might get tickets to this concert online. Here's kind of how it went. It was chat-speak but I'll make it not. Miranda: Guess ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
I'm back. I started something new and I wanted to know what you thought. I did one edit but I'm sure there's more I could do. :) Title: Breakdown: Prologue ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Don't Go Through the Agony of Searching For a Review...
Hey, I liked the review you did on my last story and I've started a new one. So if you could review it that'd be great. I just did the ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Free Reviews. I love to review :lol:
Hey! Could you review this for me? It's a prologue to my new story. If you could help I'd appreciate it!
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: What's your favorite qoute?
I finally thought of more! Well, actually that didn't take that long... 1. "Take me back to the person I used to be? Back when you were there for me? ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Kidnapped 2 - Dead Or Alive
*Today I changed my power to water elemental. I thought it looked cooler. Just letting you know. :)*
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Pippiedooda's presents! :)
Hi, just ignore my last post. I'm taking a break from that story so could you review this? Link: Genre: Other fiction. Thanks!
Mar 5, 2009
