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Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter Two
Awww. The beginning was sad. Gosh! Why did you have to make me like Neil? Gosh, this always happens to me. Even though he's barely in it I loved him. ...
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Re: 2012
Carlie and Luke- Travelers. "Did he just say he doesn't know about the dome?" Luke questioned. "Yeah, I think so," Carlie murmured, clearly confused. "He must be pretty stupid. You'd ...
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Re: Signtures
You can do music lyrics. I always do that as you can see if you read my signature every week. I change it every week haha.
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Re: The Outcasts
"Sure," Kayla replied and sat down on a stump near a fire pit. "So, what are you going to do to get away from the government. I haven't exactly thought ...
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Re: 2012
"This seems dangerous," Carlie murmured, starting to regret agreeing to going this way. She looked up to Peyton and Steven who seemed to be chatting. "It's worth it if we ...
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Re: Kidnapped 2 - Dead Or Alive
"Levi," Levi's mom called. "Are you going to bed yet? It's late." "Yeah," she called and pulled the sheets of her bed down so she could scoot into them. She ...
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Re: The Outcasts
"I don't remember much of it. They just kind of came. Sometimes, at the right time and if I try really hard I can run...fast. So, I ran out here," ...
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Re: The Outcasts
"That is so cool," Kayla gasped. "You're lucky you can turn it off like that." "Yeah," Kale replied. "So, did the government come for you too?" Kale questioned.
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Message Three.
I don't know why but I always read critiques before I read the story. Don't ask why. I saw All Time Low. I read it. Anyways... It as so good ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
"Yeah, it can come in handy," Kayla told Kale. "So, if you're an outcast also...what can you do?" Kayla hoped she could do something somewhat helpful. It could help if ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
I have to learn to be quieter, Kayla thought to herself. She looked down at her arms which were slowly becoming visible. "You caught me," she said and shrugged her ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
She kept running, making sure they weren't following her. Trees rushed by and suddenly she felt her power draining. What was about thirty miles per hour suddenly became twenty, then ...
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Re: iTunes Shuffle
1. IF SOMEONE SAYS 'ARE YOU OKAY' YOU SAY? It's not over. Okay... 2. HOW WOULD YOU DESCRIBE YOURSELF? Here (In your arms) Okay. I'm here! Yay! 3. WHAT DO ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Breakdown Chapter One Part One.
Thanks so much! You helped much. It does seem kind of boring huh? I'll fix it up. Thanks!
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Is your story in full bloom?
Hey! Could you review this for you. It's in other fiction and it's pretty short. Feel free to skim through the prologue to know what's going on. It's pretty short ...
Mar 7, 2009
