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I think Music got all of the grammar mistakes. I think this was a good start and I agree that the first paragraph was better then the second. I think ...

I just recently started writing like that. It can be challenging at first when trying to figure out how to do it smoothly. Like Suzanne said, reading books written in ...

Cry. But at least I still have microsoft word. What would you do if you were relaxing by the ocean and a unicorn emerged from the ocean and asked you ...

Thrust.

Anna or Alena. She sounds graceful and artistic. A fourteen year old boy, sandy blonde hair. He has bright blue eyes. He may seem happy in front of his friends ...

I agree with everbody else. What is going to happen to these foxes will determine if I'd read it or not. If it's just about some random foxes who go ...

Everyone already touched up on the rules so I'm just going to say hi! I hope you have fun on here. Join chats and stuff because everybody is really nice ...

Well... After this post I only have twenty more till I'm not a senior writer anymore

I'll do it. Just PM me. It shouldn't take me that long.

Well when I was in fourth grade me and my friend were on the playground thing and we were mad at each other and she called me a f***ing moron. ...

It was nice. You know that feeling you get when you see a cute guy on the street, and he sees you, and smiles; the butterfly feeling? That’s the feeling ...

Hello, welcome! You sound very talkative, that means you'll definitely get along with me. Ha. So, I'm supposed to say some rules here... The ratio. You must review two things ...

I recently started writing a story in third person in order to give more info on the story instead of just focusing on one character. I found that it's not ...

This really helped. I was writing a story in first person and it was getting difficult because I really wanted to show what was happening to another character. Maybe not ...

Okay, so everybody already said the rules so I don't have to. I just wanted to say welcome and I'm sure you'll have a lot of fun on the site. ...