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Hey, this was pretty good. On with the review... Why was it she felt her heart sting every time she saw a happy family. Okay, this sentence confused me a ...

Hey and welcome! Here are some of the main rules on YWS: 1. You must review two works before posting something of your own. People are more likely to review ...

Hello, welcome to the site. Here are some of the main rules. 1. You must review two works before posting something of your own. People are more likely to review ...

Hey Shadow! I'm going to review your story for you! But it ended up being the worst dummer of my entire life. I think you meant "summer." :wink: She was ...

Haha, just the other day I got my custom title. I was so excited, it's amazing how some people can get so many points so fast. It took me almost ...

So we're starting this then?

Basically, if you post you get points. For some things, you get more ponts then others. If you submit some of your writing it costs you points. I'm not sure ...

Hello! Welcome! So, I guess I'll tell you some of the jobs here on YWS. You know what job someone has by the color of their user name. Purple: Instructors, ...

If you're better writing as your MC's friend, maybe, you could change the story a little and make the friend the MC. Or else you'll just have to work at ...

So, hello! You're right, 'hi' is kind of outdated. :) Well, here are some jobs here on YWS. You'll know what job a person has by the color of their ...

Hi, Marnie! I'm going to review your story now.... :D The one where the victim would be running in the opposite direction of his murderer. With fresh bleeding scars along ...

Hello! I'm here to review your story. Grammar I didn't see many grammar errors. There may have been a few that I missed, but nothing too drastic. :wink: Characters I ...

Hey, could you review this for me? It's in other fiction. Thanks!

Sure, you can review my story. Title: Redemption (Prologue). Genre: Other Fiction Size: Whatever you have time for. I guess, long if you can. Either way is fine. Link: Thanks!

It's the only logical expanation for why I feel this way. With my whole body feeling broken and bruised I couldn't possibly be alive. Please capitilize the 'I''s, that's first ...