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Hey! I enjoyed reading your story. You had beautiful description and I could really imagine the scenes. Especially the scene in the beginning. I like where you're going with this ...

That made me laugh, maybe it's just because I'm really tired and that makes everything funnier?

Hey, I don't do dance, but I know what a pirouette is. Since I'm in gymnastics, I learned about them once. They are hard, I agree with that. So, anyways... ...

Ew, I hate Times. I like Georgia, font size 12. It's all I use.

Wow, I need a life because I can relate to all of these. So... You know you're a writer when your dad comes into the room saying he needs to ...

Hey, this was really well written. Onto the review! I growled at the phone, before giving it back to the secretary. I thought as I [s]glaring[/s] glared at the phone. ...

I thought this was a nice peice and it was written well. As asxz said, some of the questions could be answered with science. They weren't complete mysteries. I think ...

Hey, Saphirra. This was pretty good, although I didn't read the parts before this, I liked it. We were finally here, after much mind control and persuasion to let us ...

First of all, I live by Appleton, Wisconsin. Just thought I'd tell you that. :D Onto the review. My correction are in bold and comments in italics. I grew up ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. So here's some more information. A "review" must be three lines so, saying things like, "That was super duper awesome. Add more soon," won't work. Your ...

Yeah, even though Adam is my favorite, Grand 'Ol Opry isn't for him... Lil Rounds was really good. I like Megan, my mom calls her "tattoo girl." I agree she ...

I think it's kind of a poem. If it were a story it would be seperated into paragraphs, right? Well, it's pretty good and welcome to YWS.

Hello, Bueberry! I'm going to review your story, so, here we go... Be honest, do you really, [s]truelly[/s] truly , hear me? But now,[/b] she's gone, not dead like in ...

Hey. Just so you know, you have at least six things posted on the first page of this forum. Maybe, if you didn't post quite so much you'd get more ...

Lizzy I sat back down in my seat after a quick run to the bathroom. There was something about airplanes that I loved. The girl across the aisle from me ...