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Oh, by the way, I love your avatar. :) Going to see them in concert soon. Anyways, this was a pretty good start to your story. Here are a few ...

[quote]“ I just feel like there’s something different about me , ” I said , my voice trailing off. “Well , no use thinking about it now. Come on , ...

To post a story you click the writing icon on the header and then click submit something. You click what you want to submit, either poetry, stories, art/photography, etc. That's ...

Yeah, I added again. You told me to post here if I added more so... :)

Okay, this is probably the longest part. So, sorry about that. As always, comments and suggestions are appreciated. Shane returned her smile and placed his hands on his hips. He ...

Hey! You always review my stuff, so I'm reviewing yours. I think that Dudette got most of the nit-picks so I won't do that. I checked out the other parts, ...

Hello, Sorice. This was pretty good so far. Here are a few errors I found. "So , Hawk, whats on the menu?" asked B.J. Hunnicut Names should always be closed ...

Hey! Oh my god, I'm going to see Fall Out Boy in concert soon. Yay, I'm excited. Yeah, I'm thirteen too, in my opinion, it's a boring age. I like ...

Yeah, all your questions have been answered. But, I love YWS. I'm pretty much addicted to it now. :) I love your user name! So yeah, Hi and welcome to ...

So, you want harsh critiques? Well then, I shall rip this to shreds! Just kidding. I opened the door as quietly as I could. My mom may as well have ...

Music! I added to my story. So, yes, here it goes. So, if you could help, that'd make me happy and I'd appreciate it.

Hey, could you review this for me. It's in other fiction. There is a prologue, read it if you want but you don't need to. It's pretty self explanatory. Since, ...

Alright. Yay, I get to do the rules!! (sarcasm) 1. You have to review two works before posting your own. People are more willing to review your work if you ...

Alright, this is the first part of chapter one. I tend to write long chapters so you'll have to read it in parts. So, read on. As always, any comments ...

"Please don't tell me that I'm dreamin' when all I ever wanted was to dream another sunset with you." That is a sweet quote, good song too. "You're the one ...