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I'll join. Name: Lydia Martin Age: (Anything) 16 Gender: Female Personality: She's bubbly and outgoing but actually scared on the inside. She tries to act tough but you'd only know ...

Hey Tyler. Everbody stated rules and what not, so I won't. What's your favorite book? Movie? TV show? Hope to see you around. Like Shauni said, don't be shy! Have ...

I'll join! Name: Winnie Montgomery Age: 16 almost 17 EDIT Appearance: She's pretty short. Personality: She's very bubbly and goofy sometimes. She likes being part of a group and hates ...

Plot. Cliche characters are boring. I agree that a cliche plot can be saved by great characters. Those are my thoughts.

Hey! I'm thirteen too. Except I'm in eighth grade. So, here are some of the main rules here on YWS. :arrow: Here on YWS we have a 2:1 ratio. This ...

Hey, this reminds me of a story I'm writing. Except with a different illness. You've inspired me to work on that after I review this... Anyways, I enjoyed your story. ...

Name: Abigail Mitchell Age: 16 Race: Vampire Clan: Echelon Appearance: History: Despite her fragile looks she is very strong and smart. She doesn't like when people consider her weak or ...

Yeah. I have no study halls or anything but I never do my homework. In eighth grade they don't give us much homework...crap, I just thought of something I should ...

Well, I was in the school library which really doesn't have many good books. I asked my friend to give me a random book and she gave me this one ...

Hey :) This was still really good. I didn't see many grammar issues; I probably wouldn't be able to point any out. Yeah, anyways, I thought this was just as ...

Alright, nice start! Onto the review: Julia and Samantha were two girls who were different,[/b] but [s]the[/s] alike at the same time. They had been through it all together. [s]All ...

Hey Ellen. If you know the rules I'm not saying them. Just thought I'd say hi. And, I gues, re-welcome you to the site. I can't write poetry either. I ...

I'd read it. It took me a minute to understand the last line. That's just because my friends call me the stupid one because it takes me forever to understand ...

Hey, I really liked this and I only found one error. Baron and the fiery saliva of someone’s spite . I think you meant 'spit.' I really enjoyed this and ...

This is what I think. My brother had a myspace when he was in middle school and for his first year in high school. Then when he was about sixteen, ...