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  • Welcome Mat Re: nice to meetchya

    'Ello, Wolf. I totally understand what you mean about starting a bunch of stories and not finishing. I'm a victim of that as well. So, I'll just tell you some ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Untitled, chapter two part one *edited*

    Hey, thanks for the PM. Sorry, I didn't get to this. I was on vacation. I thought I'd just tell you I really liked this part and it cleared up ...

    Apr 20, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: POV question

    Okay, so I started a new novel. It's about a kid who was traumatized by an event in his life. So, I started writing it in first person because I ...

    Apr 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: There's This Girl

    Ohhh, I loved this!! All mistakes have already been pointed out. I really felt involved in the story, and you used my favorite name! Shane, God I love that name. ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Archive Re: The popularity ladder - Ascending

    *Sure, Selene* Winnie. I walked quickly down the hallway. I wasn't exactly sure where I was going but it didn't matter. After that speech in the auditorium, anything was better. ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Archive Re: Will you survive?

    Hey, if this starts I'm on vacation for a week. If it does start, someone can talk to my character or whatever. I'll just follow along when I get back, ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Last pic

    I hate snow, where I live it's melting. But, this picture is beautiful and it made me kind of miss the snow covered trees. If I tried this, the snow ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • OOC Archive Re: Will you survive?

    Yeah, Echelon, you can claim Madeline for James.

    Apr 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Diary Of A Tenage Disaster 2

    Hey, I think Dudette got most of the grammar problems and I agree with them all. This was very interesting and I want to keep reading. Your MC is very ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: chase chapter 1

    Hey, this is pretty good and sorry, I'm way to tired to do a full review. I promise I'll try later. This is nice, and I like the way you ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Outcasts

    I think I'm out. I just don't really feel like re-starting. And soon, I'm going to become really busy. Sorry. :(

    Apr 8, 2009
  • OOC Archive Re: Will you survive?

    Cool. Name: Madeline Gregory Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: (Pictures are nice) Madeline Connection to virus: Her father died because of the virus. Now, she just wants it to stop. ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What are you listening to at the moment?

    Words- Between The Trees.

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello there!

    Hey, welcome to YWS. Here are a few of the main rules. 1. We have a 2:1 ratio. Meaning, you must review two works before posting your own. A review ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What are you listening to right now?

    Well... "The Truth," By Good Charlotte is just finishing. "The River," By Good Charlotte just started. (I'm on artist, that's why it's the same band :))

    Apr 7, 2009


You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)