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Hey, Saphire. Nice to know more about you. I'm going to a Fall Out Boy concert on the 16th. Good luck on you book! That's kind of funny about the ...

Erm, I do like shopping actually. But, only if I have money to buy stuff! TPBM hates rap music.

Hey, Megan. Well, I'm not really good at critiquing poetry so I probably won't be any help whatsoever. But, since you asked, I'll just tell you that I liked it ...

Yeah, you reviewed my story, so I'll review yours. :) I walked down the stairs to where my mom was cooking bacon that I could hear sizzling. I think this ...

Yeah, chinchilla, you can claim him.

Hey, TeenQueen. This looked interesting so I thought I'd review it for you. :) Grammar Maybe he knew all along that a day would come when it would end this ...

Yeah, I was reading through this and I realized I miss it. This part is kind of random, but, just tell me what you think, I guess. :) By the ...

I liked the story, borntoshop. I feel like it's been forever since I read your work. Nice job, as always. :) OK, here are some things I spotted: Everything was ...

Hey, deafwriter. I really enjoyed reading your story. Here are a few suggestions/comments. :) Okay, honestly I didn't really find any huge grammar errors, so good job with that! :) ...

Hey, Viv. I'm going to review your story. I don't know if it will be too helpful, but I'll try. I was so confident, before, before I won. I'm not ...

This sounds cool! name- Rachelle Williams age- 16 gender- Female EDIT appearance- Rachelle Her eyes personality- Bubbly, sweet, outgoing. She can be sarcastic and sometimes says things she doesn't mea

Tee hee, Kara. You're kind of close... well, actually not really. I'm 5'1" and I guess I'm pretty cheerful and optimistic. I have hazel eyes, and strawberry blonde hair, though. ...

Oh, Selene. You're avvie gives so much away. :)) But, I'll try my hardest. Ok... medium length brown hair, brown eyes. Medium height. Big, puppy dog eyes. That was a ...

Okay, I'm here! I remembered, I'm glad I didn't forget. :) So, here it goes: the fire his fingers on mine ignited still blazing through my veins. I think you ...

Hey, Icefire! I'm Colleen, and I'm going to review this for you. I hated it with a fiery passion that I was amazed didn’t burn her. I think this would ...