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Mimir Mimir the Giant’s gaze was fixed on the light coming down the cave. It cast a manlike shadow upon the wall, only half confirming Mimirs guess that Odin had ...

... what just happened with that post? They weren't even there, were they?

Tell you what, I can do a first post, to set the tone. But it will be from the point of view of Mimir, the NPC that I trust you ...

It takes place in the future. I wrote a big long thing for the races, so read that. Anyway, it's been a while, and I figure five characters is enough ...

Alright, I've set it up kind of so that someone can find them.

Jorgen Holdt It was late in the day, and dusk was nearing. Jorgen had wanted to set up camp in the cover of the trees, but Kollek had insisted they ...

Yeah, that makes sense.

oh, unless you were saying that you should write in a new dwarf, in which case that'd be alright.

@takethatyoufiend Kollek is not a generic drunk dwarf. He's Jorgens traveling companion. He left with Jorgen. Neither of them were in the bar at the time of your arival. They ...

Well, I can conclude that nobody read my whole post, which is understandable due to it's length. Kollek and Jorgen, who's characters you butchered with your dialogue, left the inn ...

Sometimes it's easier to open with many characters. When you have a main protagonist that you want to introduce, maybe have him introduced by or with another protagonist. Maybe they're ...

Alright, posted. They're in a bar for the most part, but they went wandering out into the night, so that'll be fine if the vampire wants to visit them, or ...

Jorgen Holdt Jorgen had only had one ale that night, but it was an ale he shouldn't have purchased. He was recovering from a slight illness as it was, and ...

Dreadfully sorry. I've been suffering from an illness lately, and I've been effectively reduced to a vegetable. I can post today, though, but it'll be long to make up for ...

I am honored :)