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Re: The Kind I Can't Live Without
I will say I did like it. It's not wonderful or anything, but it's sincere and it shows that you are a promising writer. I remember the poetry I wrote ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: The Steven Poem
While it isn't exactly quality,it is rather...interesting.I can't say I liked it--not my style. But it surprised me. Kudos for how surprising it is. I can appreciate anything that makes ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: With Blood Stained Hands, I'll Hold You Close: Prologue
This is really good. I enjoyed it and I look forward to the posting of more of this story. It's written well with excellent imagery. However, some of it is ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Don't Have a Title, but Please READ! (Chapter 1)
Some of your dialogue is a little awkward. Especially with authority figures. It's easy to make a protagonist's dialogue natural because their voice is in your head, but when you ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Falling Angel
I took a poetry writing workshop last semester and the only information I walked away with was that poetry is the anarcy of the writing world. So it's hard for ...
Feb 24, 2010
