mephistophelesangel

Hey! It's been a long time! I am pretty embarrassed to say that this is something really underdeveloped. The ideas are all scrambled up... Sorry :( I'll try harder to ...

So humorous, so awesome. Dannnnnnnnngg, I could have never come up with this! Congrats on the Literary Spotlight! You really earned it, buddy! :D

Wow, gods, that was an awesome story! I think that this does deserve to be featured, save a few spelling errors. But, you know, still AWESOME!! HAHA!

What's HKK? :0

Hey Deanie! As to your confusion, I should probably clear that up. They SUSPECT that she has seen something, but they don't really know what she had seen. They're kind ...

Hey! Thanks for your review, first! Yes, the shower of blood part was a little overboard, I agree. I fixed it, by the way :) Thank you again!

Thank you for all the points that you made. I really saw a lot of things I didn't notice before in my poem because of you. Thanks so much!

Hey! Thanks so much for your review, it helped SO much! As for the shower of blood part, haha, yes, I read it again and it did seem kind of ...

Hey Anadir! Thanks for the nitpicks! I never noticed them :0 And the "You have the house to..." part, it was intended because it's a note, and the person who ...

Hey Rosey Unicorn! Yep, your review definitely helped a lot. Although I think that if you read the past chapters, you would understand the storyline better. And no, I'm not ...

Hi! Thanks for your review! Also thanks for the nitpicks :) Although, I kind of think that dialogues can have grammar errors, because, you know, it's somebody speaking. Other than ...

Thanks, Andy! About your first point about shooting up to his feet on the chair, yep, he did it right on top of the chair and tipped it over. I'll ...

Hey Deanie! Thanks, as always! I noticed the problem about Mason's reaction, too. Your suggestion was great. So I fixed up some things, added some things, and I reposted it. ...

I also took your advice about Beverly's part and made some edits. Thanks!

Hey, thanks again, Deanie! I'll just say that chapter 11 will be posted really soon, like today. I have already written until chapter 16 or something, and I'm trying to ...