mephet

This is really good. I particularly like the writing itself: it flows nicely and feels polished, making it pleasant to read. You have a good variety of long and short ...

Hello! I'll second yizhongt and say that I enjoyed reading this and I'm curious how it continues. Overall I really like this as a first chapter: it introduces conflict (racial ...

Okay, I'm really sorry for taking so long. The illness lingered, I'd fallen behind on schoolwork, blah blah blah, I started it and then left it unfinished for days and ...

Alright! Let's begin this review the way I always do - I'll quote your text, and add my thoughts as I read it. I'll do so both as a reader ...

I see a lot of promise in this idea - it's interesting, relevant, and human. With good, strong and realistic characters (we don't really see them enough to judge that ...