mephet

9/10 Dreamy!

8/10 Creepy, dark, strong colours, simple enough to be recognizable at a glance.

It's definitely an intriguing title and raises a lot of questions - Who is speaking? What have they done? What will happen to them now? - that draw the reader ...

I've heard it said that third person tends to be the safer option for beginning writers, but I think you can go with whichever POV you feel personally most comfortable ...

I don't have much experience writing action scenes (yet :P), so take this with a grain of salt, but here's my first thought: focus on the characters. Of course you ...

Okay, I'm really sorry for taking so long. The illness lingered, I'd fallen behind on schoolwork, blah blah blah, I started it and then left it unfinished for days and ...

For my current novel, I began working on my characters (after getting used to the idea of them) by filling out a character profile for each of them, more specifically ...

"There is no such thing as good writing. There is only good rewriting." - Harry Shaw "Books are not written - they're rewritten." - Michael Crichton

- There was wind in the air. And I was sad. - Mark thought that I was stupid, but didn't say it.

Alright! Let's begin this review the way I always do - I'll quote your text, and add my thoughts as I read it. I'll do so both as a reader ...

I see a lot of promise in this idea - it's interesting, relevant, and human. With good, strong and realistic characters (we don't really see them enough to judge that ...

Twilight: Epic Fail. There.

Perfect for a perfectionist like me: First drafts are allowed to suck big time. All you need to worry about is finishing them.