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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Uprising Ch.1

    Hey, I'm here to give you a review in return for the one given on The Masquerader. Thanks, by the way. This was very intruiging and definitely has me wondering ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Normal Ch. 7

    Whoa. This was great. Melanie of all people. I can't believe that one. She seemed like she was one of the best handling it. It's always those, isn't it? You ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Normal Ch 6

    Hey, Here to review again. I thought this moved way too fast and didn't do anything with the plot or the character growth. I would shorten this and stick it ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Growing Catastrophe

    Hey, This is interesting. I don't really know what to say other than good job with the description. I was going to just check the website for any review requests ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Normal Ch 5

    Hey, You're still building characters. Great! I really feel like just going into the review today. I'll tell you what I liked at the end and interspersed through here. Janika ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 6200 ch. 3

    Hey Flyer, This is a review for the review you gave me. I'm afraid, I haven't read anything else of the novel, but this is pretty good. Three The space ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: DELETED

    Hey, I'm here to review as requested. On the seventh day of the month July of the year 1937, my families life would never be the same. Families should be ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Never Like Pink

    Hey, I love young voices that tell the story. Even though this wasn't technically, but I still liked it. I hate to disagree, but I'm a fan of stories like ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Normal Ch 4

    Hey, Your story is definitely getting better. The dialouge took a bit of a hit in my opinion, but I'll point that out later. I don't know if this is ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Book About Pirates Part 2

    Hey, I'm here to review as requested. If you need me to review anything else, I have a link that leads you to my review thread. This was good. I'm ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Did. This.

    Hey, Here to give the requested review of this wild topic. Congratulations on everything this piece has won. It definitely deserves all of this. You've already had some raving reviews, ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Of Wild Flowers-chapter 1

    Hey Snoopy, I'm here to do that review you asked for. This was definitely interesting, and from the other reviews I can tell you've already changed it around a lot, ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Gold Watch (chapter 2)

    Hey, I'm here to review. I was actually planning on reviewing this anyway. This was good. I write more fluffy literature with more description, so this is definitely a nice ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I Won't Let Go (2)

    Hey, I'm here to give the review requested. It was very good. I only found some typos to point out. I don't understand somethings, but that is the beauty of ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: the princess and her mom and dad

    Welcome Ashley, People take better to pieces that have good grammar. You'll get more reviews if all the names are capitalized and if if looks like you took more than ...

    Feb 13, 2011


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World