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This could have been a lot and it wasn't really anything. This reminded me of a poem called "The Highwayman." If you look that poem up and read it you'll ...

Hey, That was cool... and weird. I thought the main character was a little too mature for for a teenager that has just been given the responsibility of a mother. ...

Hey, Interesting topic but you have a lot of typos. I'm not going to point any out but if you read over it again you'll find that words are missing ...

Thanks for the reviews. This gives me a boost of confidence. My first post was a bit of a fluke.

Want to read Chapter One ? Coughing echoed around the room with the dull thud of rain leaking through a poorly thatched roof into a wooden bucket. One woman sat ...

It was interesting. There was a rhythm to your sentences that I thought seemed kind of odd in a prose. Maybe try poetry if that's how you write normally. A ...

Honestly, I lost interest halfway through. If you could shorten it it would be better.

I liked this and have read the second one which I liked as well. Your good at what you do but could you eventually bring the hit-man back into the ...

I think Mark's dialogue was overly excited in a way that was almost annoying. I saw no real reason for it though I did like the character. Keep him friendly ...

I really liked this poem. To me it sounded like it was given from the point of a lonely/insane person. The only thing I could ask for is a better ...

Thanks for the post. I'm new and trying to dip my toes in the water. Maybe I should just jump in.

Okay. Thanks.

This story confused me. I liked the idea but wasn't sure of the meaning. If you could go into more detail on Eric's relationship with his mother and the man ...

A street light flickered in front of a grimy building with a neon sign that stated the business was open. Loud music with a strong beat and meaningless lyrics came ...

I would have liked to know the characters more. The concept I liked. The personality you showed of your characters I liked and I liked the conflict but it seemed ...