megsug

Okay, you can discount like two of the views because I had to come to this story three times for different interruptions. I wanted to point out before I started ...

This was better. I'm glad my review helped. One little thing. I can't help it! Scrambled is spelled wrong. Megsug.

Interesting. A little off the wall, but it was cool. It was a dark wintry night, the Moon was full and it splayed it's silver rays all over the Earth. ...

This was good. I didn't know what to expect by the title but that can be a good thing. My phone jumped to life before the sun had set up ...

You're first chair, and I'm second, and there is no third. We're bari saxophones which is about the stupidest instrument to march with, right before the tuba, but we like ...

I liked this... but I am a fan of most romantic stories. This was really short. So short, in fact that I am wondering if there is a second part. ...

Hey, I liked the story. I didn't find many things wrong but there were a few things here and there. I like the humor. Humor is one of the things ...

Hey! I have gotten reviews on this but I need someone to tell me if I have made my story better. I know you haven't read my first draft but ...

This was a bad chapter. The real chapter three is better.

The sun was setting; casting long shadows over the baron landscape. Baron is a word, but it means a nobleman. The word you are looking for is barren. No biggie. ...

First of all, good suspense and great twist with Ricio being the monster. Very nice. I liked the detail. There are only a few things that I have to say. ...

Maliel is a country that has been taken over by the growing Durtianian Empire. The Masquerader is a masked vigilante that attacks the Durtanian army. A rebel group plans action ...

Thanks for the reviews. Yeah... Grim is kind of cliched. I'll try to fill him out a bit. He was supposed to just appear though. Maybe that doesn't work. I'll ...

A squeal of breaks. Sirens. Bright white lights. James. Calm, soft words. Red hair. Golden eyes. James. His leg hurt, and then nothing hurt. He felt nothing. Even emotions didn't ...

Thanks for the all the reviews. I get what you're saying about the emotions, but I kind of wanted to portray her being trapped in the relationship. I'll try to ...