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Hey Broken, Welcome to YWS. This story was really good. I couldn't write this good when I was your age. I'm going to go ahead with the review. There isn't ...

You certainly have a story here. I'm not sure, however, that it should have been posted as a literary piece. It almost sounds like a blog entry, so maybe you ...

Hey Tm, I'm interested in WWII and liked your telling of it. If you need to do any research, I found this Time article on the parachuters of Normandy that ...

Hey, I was intruiged by this. My novel is called The Masquerader. It's about a country that's been taken over by another and is in the process of rebelling. The ...

American: 20 Canadian: 3 English: 8 Filipino: 4 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 5 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...

Hey, I wanted to say your edited version of chapter one is better. Chapter two has many of the same characteristics of chapter one. It's almost like we're still being ...

Hey Time8keeper, I liked the hook at the very beginning. This definetly makes me want to read the rest of your novel. The way your prolouge is vague, but still ...

For a little background, this was originally a story for my mom on Mother's day. It was way simpler then (and better in my opinion :D ), but to make ...

Hi, I'm ready to review. I won't review: poetry (I don't know anything about it.) scripts or lyrics I will review non-fiction, but I'm not very interested. I don't know ...

This is for the Quote Me contest where we had to choose one quote out of thirty. My quote was: "A single rose can be my garden... a single friend, ...

Maliel is a country that has been taken over by the growing Durtianian Empire. The Masquerader is a masked vigilante that attacks the Durtanian army. A rebel group plans action ...

Zoli/Penguin Sanctuary I stalk around the edges of the crowd, tail in between my legs, ears down, the standard weakling pose. Hoping no one notices the dog, I wait nervously ...

Hey Charlii, I liked this. There were a few grammar mistakes you kept repeating like: Kirsty sat on the sofa, her mum had her head back with a facial mask ...

Name: Zoli Age: 16 Years in the zoo: 3 Personality: Zoli is a grey hound who was on the race tracks. She has taken to one of the zoo keepers, ...

This was interesting. I liked the irony. I was eternally trapped in a four-year-olds bedroom. Ha ha. I tapped my fingers against the glass and frowned slightly. It was a ...